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PostSubject: Naruto.   Sun Jul 25, 2010 2:11 am

Welcome to my application. My name is Naruto Uzumaki




PERSONAL

Name: Uzumaki, Naruto

Gender: Male

Age: 15

Affiliation: Hidden Leaf
Rank: Sage
Elemental affinity: Wind,Fire and Leaf

Sexual Orientation: Straight

Relationships: Alone

Family: No Data

Likes: Ramen, Riceball's and lastly Adventure

Dislikes: Old Milk, Perv, and lastly Enemy's

Personality: Love to train and try to become the next hokage sometime's say a wrong thing at a bad time and is always confindent into finshing what his aiming for.

Appearance: [img][/img]


CLAN AND BLOODLINE

Clan: Name: Uzumaki

Bloodline: Uzumaki

Abilities: Sealing, Rasengan

History: Met with the senju clan and joined together

Location: All dead


JUTSU:

Shadow Clone,Rasengan, Rasen-shuriken,Omada Rasegan, Windmill Shadow Clone, Suppo Omada Raegan


BACKGROUND

History: Was born in the vilalge everyone hated me and not loved me for who i am i got shunned then i saved a hyuuga that was getting picked by bullies cause she has byakugan i did it for her i then went on a secret mission almost got killed by mizuki for getting a secret scroll iruka saved me i then made it as a genin and i met freinds sasuke and sakura with also kakashi ino, choji, jiraya, tsuande, lil squad 4th hokage, 3d hokage, mom, sai, rock lee,ten ten, neji, shikamaru,kiba and much more and i wanna be hokage.

RP Sample: Naruto would gaze at his foe as he owuld launch a kunia toward's his foe attempting to hit him in the upper right case of the rib thus if it connet's hitting the rib and casuing a little ammount of damaged as then naruto would cut his plam and summon a clone first so he can protect him self from imcoming attack's as he would summon another clone to help him with Omada rasegan as the clone would charge with naruto the first clone that naruto summoned would clap on to his right hand and help him summon another rasegan as naruto right behind the kunia would charge up with a red orb of chakra in his right hand and a blue orb of chakra in his left as he would yell out "yout going to fie today...." naruto would then wait for his foe's reaction.
Source: BEEN HERE
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PostSubject: Re: Naruto.   Sun Jul 25, 2010 2:22 am

Sorry but your RP is messy, same with your grammar... I can't approve of this, for more reasons than just the RP.
1) You know you can have more jutsu, right? You're trying for the main character of the series.
2) Personality and history are kinda too brief for my liking...
3) Copy the CODE, not the preview part of the app. Makes it less messy.
4) Well... there isn't a fourth. Get a RP trainer, and come back and fight me one on one to see if you got better. I'll even reserve the Naruto spot until you get better, just because I'm feeling nice. And, I can't train you - I'm not on often, since I'm at vacation with mah family. Sorry
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PostSubject: sob   Sun Jul 25, 2010 2:25 am

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PostSubject: Re: Naruto.   Sun Jul 25, 2010 2:26 am

In the meantime, you can make another char if you want Razz
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PostSubject: 2 weeks   Sun Jul 25, 2010 2:29 am

2 weeks ill be back just wait and ill fight u and try to win ill show u i masterd rp CRAP GRAMMAR
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